It’s dishonest, and you’ll only make the guy mad when you meet in person.
Similar to the “just checking this out” headline above, coming off like online dating is chore to you will be a turnoff to men.
Honest, confident, humble, funny, friendly — this is how you want to be, not aloof.
You’ll also notice a typo at the end (“that” instead of “than”).
She comes off as mean, superficial, and demanding, and I’m guessing the men reading her profile think so, too.
It’s not as in depth as your About section, but it’s still very important. You also want to be aware of certain words that will attract men.